Climax: During the climax, the main character leaves their partner and lives in a hotel to try and get their life back together again.
Falling Action: During the falling the action the main character’s former partner shows up at their door and tries to get them back. Eventually the encounter turns violent, but the main character hides.
Resolution: the main character stays hidden until their former partner leaves. They change their name and move away.
when reading these articles, is has been presented that there are several different types of abuse. Some of these can even be more or less presentable than others. Verbal abuse is the most common one, and the one that is taken the least seriously. As many people believe the saying that “sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never hurt me”. However, many people suffer from this type of abuse and can even be affected in an extreme manner.
https://www.peaceoverviolence.org/iii-the-cycle-of-violence-and-power-and-control
https://au.reachout.com/articles/signs-of-an-abusive-relationship
https://www.brides.com/signs-of-an-emotionally-abusive-relationship-5112027
Hey Alexia!
This seems like its going to be a super good book! You are doing a great job coming up with this story. The detail you add and the way you write is so good. I cannot wait to keep reading your next blog post. Good job!
-Syd
Hey Alexia,
I can’t wait to read this story! I enjoy how you evaluate different elements of your plot because I am studying a unit on it in English class. Good luck with your next post, and I can’t wait to see the finished product!
Here’s A Link That Might Help:
https://www.nownovel.com/blog/what-makes-a-good-story/
Mahdiya A.
Hey Alexia,
I really like the way the story is thought out. The topic is also very intriguing. I cant wait to read it!
Here is a link that you might find useful:
https://www.abccopywriting.com/2013/12/10/what-really-makes-a-good-story
Hi Alexia,
your climax and overall plot of your story seems very intriguing and I can’t wait to read it once it is completed! I really like how you mention some parts about different kinds of abuse, as it is something everyone should be aware of. I suggest to maybe start thinking about names for your characters because the next step would be to write the story, and names are a huge part of that. Hope that helps!
Julie
Hi Alexia,
I think this story touches on many important points. In my opinion, words hurt more than physical pain. Bruises and scratches may go away, but words stay with one all the way. Hurting someone with words is the easiest way to hurt someone, but could affect the person the most. Of course, there is a difference between making a mistake and just being a bad person. But, what could we do to fix miss said words?
https://inquestconsulting.com/insights/what-to-do-when-youve-said-something-you-shouldnt-have/
This is a link with some suggestions, maybe you could add some tips on how to fix the mistake.
-Kiara
Hey Alexia,
The book sounds very interesting with a very interesting climax. I really like the topic you chose, as abuse is a current, serious and important subject to shine light on. I can’t wait to read your story, and your next blog post. Good luck!
Dorra